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I could feel it; the empty air that is surrounding me, caressing me. Suffocating me. It felt like a maze that I am caught inside, lost and confuse on finding my way out. I am always hiding, running away from the terrors that only I can see; afraid of the demons that is locked inside the maze with me that only I can feel. With every steps, with every breath, I can see it; the icy atmosphere and the frigid stare that is directed toward me. I can feel it; the transparent hand and the ominous hunger that is hounded angrily toward me. I cry. I scream. I beg and plea, but always, always, it is always behind me, laughing a laugh that sends chill down my bones. A chill that tells me that they can see me for who I really am. I feel so exposed, standing stark naked in front of this demon that I can no  longer see but can only feel. I have no facade to show it, no disguise to hide behind. No nothing. I tried so desperately to get away, hating that it can see me, sense me. Reach out for me as if it can understands me. My heart, it cries as it beat wildly inside my chest, screaming at me to run as far as I can go. My mind, it shatters beyond repair as it felt a looming presence that is coming nearer and nearer, it's fingers close enough to grasp it's very being. I cried out a tear drenching sob as my lungs gave way; my whole body feeling as if it was immobilized as I felled heavily against the floor, my fingers digging into the ground as I convulsed in everlasting pain as I tried to breathe in the air that I so desperately needed. But I couldn't, wouldn't. Not when those fingers grasped tightly around my throat, squeezing as if it's life depended on it. I tried to hold onto the hand that belonged to these fingers, but I couldn't; not when it went through as if it wasn't even there. My whole body shook, trembled in absolute fear. My sight was losing it's vision and my mind was losing it's thoughts. My ears were ringing and my body laid completely stilled. My eyes lowered involuntarily and my breathing slowed. My heart stopped beating and my lungs... my lungs simply froze.
©2009 ~Luv-Duh-Rain
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O.O
First actual prose that I've written. Something that doesn't concern a second chapter or a third. This doesn't have to do with rhyming or whatever. This is simply a ONE-SHOT.

HOLY SHET.

I like it.

Feels strange, but I like it. x3

Anyways, tell me what you think and what not. XD

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:iconhollow-serendipity:
O_o that was a tad creepy....BUT AWESOME!!!!!

--
It is a miracle that curiosity survives formal education.
Albert Einstein

Im ashamed of all my somethings
-Flyleaf
:icongalabrotix:
Nice job with the first submission with prose, I was pretty impressed. Although it was dark, but heh, oh well.

--
"My teeth were jail bars, unsurpassable
So those words remained within my head"

Aeziba, 'Tell Me What To Say'.

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