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Wish Upon A Mistaken Star. by ~Luv-Duh-Rain:iconLuv-Duh-Rain:



I had once closed my eyes
To wish upon that shooting star
I had wished with all my might
That everything
Will simply stop
And stand still

Was it naive of me
To wish for no change?
Was it stupid of me
To believe that everything
Would simply stay the same?

I hoped it wasn't
But I knew the truth
And when I wished
Upon that shooting star
Everything had gotten so much worst

For when I had opened my eyes
Things had change
And everything
Was no longer the same

My family had left me
To be with their own
My friends had forgotten me
And I became so alone

Things had happened
So very fast
Things had happened
And I just felt the pain
That will forever last

How is it
That they had changed
While I stayed the same?
Why is it
That they ignore me
As if I have never been?

Because
It was that one shooting star
That my life was thrown away
Because
It was that one stupid wish
That my life is no longer my own
©2009 ~Luv-Duh-Rain
:iconluv-duh-rain:

Author's Comments

Ehhhh, kinda rusty here...^^;
It's been awhile - not really, but for me, it felt like a hell of a long time :aww: - since I last thought of writing poetry, but I've been slowly working on it for awhile now.

Anyways, I got inspired with this topic while I was thinking of ideas for my story. :XD:

I wanted to do a short story, but I got no idea on how to start it, but since I had a general idea and didn't want to lose it, I decided to place the words in short phrases and this poem just happen to come out of it. :XD:

It's not that great compare to my others, but it's something. So tell me what you think!! :XD:

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:iconxxnothingiseternalxx:
Your not rusty, that was great! I loved it and that sounds like it would make a great story!

--
I'll stay by your side
When the sun begins setting
Watching you fade and never forgetting
~Mayfly written by me
:iconluv-duh-rain:
>.< Thank you~
Your comment is much appreciated! ^-^

--
Life is like a dream.
Live it before it disappears.
:iconxxnothingiseternalxx:
Your welcome!

--
I'll stay by your side
When the sun begins setting
Watching you fade and never forgetting
~Mayfly written by me
:iconhollow-serendipity:
That was amazing I don't know what you mean by rusty!

--
It is a miracle that curiosity survives formal education.
Albert Einstein

Im ashamed of all my somethings
-Flyleaf
:iconluv-duh-rain:
Haa, well I felt rusty while I was trying to write it. >.<

--
Life is like a dream.
Live it before it disappears.
:iconhollow-serendipity:
well you still did a damn good job ^_^

--
It is a miracle that curiosity survives formal education.
Albert Einstein

Im ashamed of all my somethings
-Flyleaf
:iconluv-duh-rain:
lol thank you :bow:

--
Life is like a dream.
Live it before it disappears.

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